Today we saw a cool photo of a shark in the Herald. Here is the writing we did about the picture
lemon shark
lemon shark swim up and down,
swimming in the ocean underground.
trying to find some food to eat,
intil an person has a peek.
when he is all done,
he will have more fun.
the end.
lemon shark shark fighting verociouslly swimming right up to met me circuling around me pretending to be grinning i thaught he was being freindlly NEK MINUTE...
FRIDAY, 23 MARCH 2012
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shark fighting verociouslly
swimming right up to met me
circuling around me
pretending to be grinning
i thaught he was being freindlly
NEK MINUTE...
Hi Five Shark
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I swam across the sea
Then saw a lemon Shark;
I thought he's going to eat me
So I threw him Barks
But then he went away
and so I followed him;
he went so fast I couldn't catch him
Then the sun grew dim
Then he came back
he hid behind a rock;
Then I was really sad
I had to eat some stock
But then he was behind
near his rocky bed;
Then he opened his mouth and ate me
now I'm DEAD!!
TO BE CONTINUED...
wow. scary but really exceptional
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